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Never let me to touch you again

19. 02. 2007
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Petr_Fonvald

Jen tak jsem něco zkusil

There’s nothing but stupid seek and hide

I’ve lost all I’ve got

I’m less than nothing but

I will never give up my fight

For seeing our love again


Please

Love me

Rape me

Don´t Leave me

 

There’s nothing that you can do for me

I’ve been drinking my beers

For all this long years

I know your body and mind

I need you just for last ride

To rape more than your body to set me free

From you forever

Pleas

fill me

and

Feel me

Kill me

And never let me to touch you again

 

There’s nothing that I can do for myself

I’m wasting my time

I’m good just for dying

There’s just sadness and pain

Just hope that love will reign again

Do This just for hope that you free yourself

From me forever

 

Dont

Love me

just

Rape me

than

Leave me

And never let our love to be seen again

 

Pleas

fill me

and

Feel me

than

Kill me

And never let me to touch you again

 


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Impossible to describe.. the beaty of using such rhymes is incredible, I absolutely love it.. 

you've got there mistakes-in please you've forgotten to type 'e'

 

But, reading it again, I am little confused of what you wanted to emphisize, you do love her,  you would never give up your fight for the love, but you couldn't touch her again-because of you or her? .. well, to guess for whom you've written is not so difficult.. 


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