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Přidejte seNever let me to touch you again
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Petr_Fonvald
Jen tak jsem něco zkusil
There’s nothing but stupid seek and hide
I’ve lost all I’ve got
I’m less than nothing but
I will never give up my fight
For seeing our love again
Please
Love me
Rape me
Don´t Leave me
There’s nothing that you can do for me
I’ve been drinking my beers
For all this long years
I know your body and mind
I need you just for last ride
To rape more than your body to set me free
From you forever
Pleas
fill me
and
Feel me
Kill me
And never let me to touch you again
There’s nothing that I can do for myself
I’m wasting my time
I’m good just for dying
There’s just sadness and pain
Just hope that love will reign again
Do This just for hope that you free yourself
From me forever
Dont
Love me
just
Rape me
than
Leave me
And never let our love to be seen again
Pleas
fill me
and
Feel me
than
Kill me
1 názor
Barefoot Rampancy
15. 01. 2013Impossible to describe.. the beaty of using such rhymes is incredible, I absolutely love it..
you've got there mistakes-in please you've forgotten to type 'e'
But, reading it again, I am little confused of what you wanted to emphisize, you do love her, you would never give up your fight for the love, but you couldn't touch her again-because of you or her? .. well, to guess for whom you've written is not so difficult..