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29. 08. 2001
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ladyDeborah
pokus o engliš :o).........
... One time - you were here,
I felt our great love,
this love was so beutiful - so free,
this love was for you and me.
Everything seemed so easy,
but now - something is different,
I´m hurrying in this lunacy
and I´m in a tight corner.
I´m lonely in my bed,
my dreams - you´re on the further bank of the river.
I want to swim this river across,
I want to be somewhere else instead.
Sorry - sorry for myself,
I´m feeling badly - feeling low.
I love you so much
You´re in my soul...
I think,that your rhymes aren´t bad,but your english is so much better. I like your poem. And I have tip 4 U :)
ladyDeborah
08. 09. 2001
nejak tam ty rymy nevidim.... ale rymovani v anglictine muze byt docela zabava, mam to vyzkouseny, hrozne se mi libi kdyz se rymujou veci, ktery se pisou uplne jinak
ladyDeborah
02. 09. 2001ladyDeborah
31. 08. 2001
well.. yeah.. good but a little bit too much sweet. ja proste pisu jenom o vrazdach a tohle je.....trochu jiny. :)