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16. 05. 2012
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ležím na zádech

ruce pod hlavou

oči zavřené

a sním ..

                           leží na zádech

                           vedle sebe

                           neví ani už

                           zda nad sebou

                           strop, či nebe

                           ví jen, že

                           žena a muž

                           po krásném

                           milování

                           chvílemi

                           mlčky

                           ona usměje se

                           na něj

                           chvílemi

                           on na ni

                           pak oba

                           oči zavřené

                           a opět znova,

      znova sní

                           jak ona je

                           jen s ním

                           a on jen s ní

                           jak ..

 

                                                                                 leží na zádech

                                                                                 vedle sebe

                                                                                 neví ani už

                                                                                 zda nad sebou

                                                                                 strop, či nebe

                                                                                 ví jen, že

                                                                                 žena a muž

                                                                                 po krásném

                                                                                 milování

                                                                                 chvílemi

                                                                                 mlčky

                                                                                 ona usměje se

                                                                                 na něj

                                                                                 chvílemi

                                                                                 on na ni

                                                                                 pak oba

                                                                                 oči zavřené

                                                                                 a opět znova,

                            znova sní

                                                                                 jak ona je

                                                                                 jen s ním

                                                                                 a on jen s ní

                                                                                 jak ..

 

                                             leží na zádech

                                                                                                                                                                          vedle sebe

                                                                                                                                                                          neví ani už

                                                                                                                                                                          zda nad sebou

                                                                                                                                                                          strop, či nebe

                                                                                                                                                                          ví jen, že

                                                                                                                                                                          žena a muž

                                                                                                                                                                          po krásném

                                                                                                                                                                          milování

                                                                                                                                                                          chvílemi

                                             mlčky

                                                                                                                                                                          ona usměje se

                                                                                                                                                                          na něj

                                                                                                                                                                          chvílemi

                                                                                                                                                                          on na ni

                                                                                                                                                                          pak oba

                                                                                                                                                                          oči zavřené

                                                                                                                                                                          a opět znova,

                                             znova sní

                                                                                                                                                                          jak ona je

                                                                                                                                                                          jen s ním

                                                                                                                                                                          a on jen s ní

                                                                                                                                                                          jak ..

                                                                                                                                                                                                                         

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Myotis
21. 05. 2012
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konias
16. 05. 2012
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...jak to říct? ...překvapivě vícevrstevnaté :) ...moc se mi líbilo... T*

Krásné usínání*

Marcela.K.
16. 05. 2012
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jitrničku?

Kuře_Juře
15. 05. 2012
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:) *

srozumeni
15. 05. 2012
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líbí...***

gabi
15. 05. 2012
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výborný nápad

gabi
15. 05. 2012
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pekné zaspávanie *

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15. 05. 2012
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