What I wanted to say-don´t think about grammar, spelling and pronounciation when you deal with literature or when you speak to foreigners, it takes too much time and the idea may disappear. Of course, as far as the english language lessons are concerned, the situation is different.
You are quite right about the critics.
I´m surprised, you haven´t noticed yet that the critics aren´t about literature mostly. Personaly, I think this server is mainly about meeting friendly people, about feeling close souls...
moc radostné čtení !!!
:-)
Don't think about pronounciation and things like that.
I suppose that people that read this critic are not very excited, what you think ? We'd better write emails, if we don't talk about literature......
Actualy, it's mostly the sense of reality...but i want to tell (or better write) you something. Today I was at the HUBs concert here, down in Valmez and it was realy exciting. I think they have a biggest sense of absurdity I'v ever seen.I had realy interesting conversation with them and i have to told ya, they were cute :-)though they were Americans:-)....I'd love to finish the point, but I'm realy stoned so...sorry for spelling and that stuff ( luckily I can not mess up the pronouciation here).
Hmmmm. Cats have always been sort of a symbol for a corruption, or rather, perversity......i just wanted to provoke you. The cat need not mean this .....
Well, in this case, it can be an imagery of feelings you remember or, perhaps, those you want to remember ....
I actually think, that suppressed instincts are more visible in the end of the stuff.
I like your sense for absurdity.
That symbolism with cat...,somewhat a hint of the corruption that Poe had liked....( I mean the symbol), always reminds me of an underworld and mistrust....
Shall I do a deeper critic just choose a perspective of approach. I'm no structuralist or stuff like that but just a normal reader. It can be a nice game, if you like critics....
And What about tha worms?You didn´t mention them anyway and that's a pity because I'v made 'em to have most importance there. (Their junction with underworld is also more explicit,I mean it's almost liaison).Cat is only a legacy of passed times, it's only a satisfaction
Ehm, ehm... pardon I was untimely interrupted (that pissing), but now I'm BACK. "Where have I finished...."yeah, the cat is only a satisfaction of my suppressed instincts. And...hmmmmmmmmm
that's all for today.
Díky Darkminde.Skutečně to tak troch "anachronické" je:-)
já už to čtu asi po čtvrtý...prostě se mi to líbí...na tomhle stylu ulítávám .-)*
Pekné, pobavilo...
Možno len... začínaš "dnes bylo větrno", ale list je písaný až deň na to, ak som správne pochopil záver...
Každopádne veľmi pekné pozvanie na ryby... :))
-t-
A co žáci Anaximandrovi? Ti nic? :o)
Líbí!
:o)*
hahá :)))))
Monty, jak to, žes mi nenaavízovala takovou bžundu? :(
Wopi, páč jsem poslední dobou hlava děravá... jako ten děduška Maróz.
"Ach já hlupák starý... hlava děravá... berlu Mrazilku jsem si zapomněl doma!"
hm... a ukázalo se, že celej děd Maróz je bez berly k ničemu, že podstatná je berla a s ní by zimu zařídil každý pianěr
No, až na to, že ne každý pianěr umí zpívat hlasem Otomara Korbeláře "Vyrostla štíhlá jedlička"...
sakryš to je dílko :))) přečtu si to ještě minimálně několikrát je to výborný *TIP
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