Písmák Československá literární komunita
Tak jako generace autorů před vámi, publikujte svoji psanou tvorbu. Podělte se o svoje názory a sbírejte zpětnou vazbu na svoje díla. Inspirujte se a učte od nejlepších.
Přidejte seWinter
21. 09. 2003
0
0
443
Autor
Jenniffer
The wind is weeping like my soul
I can´t tell you anymore
I´m alone but you don´t know
Now I don´t have any choice
I can´t hear your lovely voice
I can´t sleep my love is deep
Why I see snow in your eyes
Why I hear your icy lies
But why I have to recognize
You´re so nice
The stars are falling down the sky
Some of them stayed in my eyes
Only my tear knows how I feel
Like the candles on the tree
Shining just for Christmas Eve
I´m on fire it´s so hard
...well, pretty good i think..the stars are falling down the sky
some of them stayed in my eyes...great..but why didn't you used just "eye"..it would rhyme more...