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16. 06. 2004
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dlhagi
I hear the smell of a cigarette in a dream
light and heavy it may seem
We live in an ice age
where flowers bleed
butterflies dressed in yellow
and blue hang on the curtain
The handle moves
while the door open
and nobody walks in...
Am I? Through the grain of black coffee
bottomless End spreads to the
emptiness of our souls
I feel a duty to pas over the time
patiently
quietly
falling asleep
We live in an ice age
hardly anyone can imagine
the minutes of a second
When nobody walks in...
light and heavy it may seem
We live in an ice age
where flowers bleed
butterflies dressed in yellow
and blue hang on the curtain
The handle moves
while the door open
and nobody walks in...
Am I? Through the grain of black coffee
bottomless End spreads to the
emptiness of our souls
I feel a duty to pas over the time
patiently
quietly
falling asleep
We live in an ice age
hardly anyone can imagine
the minutes of a second
When nobody walks in...
A nice atmosphere in here (although less words would make it a wee bit better, more concentrated, better aimed)
...but how to hear a smoke?