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Light & Dark

04. 01. 2001
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Toto je moje nejdelší dílo vůbec - a ještě k tomu celé anglicky.

Light & Dark I am singing You almost pleasant song, ´cause I believe I´ll be here for very long You´re the One, with whom I want to live, You´re the One I want to give a wedding ring, The One, I want to live forever with… Could You please let my heart be lucky, every time when You lie down closely to me and whisper without shame, both You and Me feel beuatiful flame which will never go away… I want to be Your Sun, Your source of entire fun, I want to be Your slave, but be still enough brave, slave who will never be tied… I will do anything to set my heart free, if I could only a short while with You be, ´cause I know what does it mean for me, I won´t care about anybody around me, nobody but You and me… You´re my only glittering star, although out there is peace or war, I wish we were happy together, but I don´t wanna live forever not without You… I will undress You with my eyes, underneath the bright blue skies, Come sit down to me upon the meadow, and if You love me too, let me know, and we´ll be like in the paradise… I can not live without Your smile, or else I am wailling every while, I can´t live without Your touch because I love You very much, and don´t know another way… I´m singing You a very sad song, ´cause my days are already gone, can You do me the last favour, please, be forever my saviour, if You will not be my lover… I am the only Master of my fate, over and over I call Your name. but the answer is out of my hearing and my heart is too quickly fading. like a rose without a water… I don´t know, what to do, to stop the love I feel to You, every Your touch or kiss was so tender, but this love got me to unknown danger, but I don´t have fear of Death… I´m already tired of the life´s cruelty, don´t I´ve the right for a bit of mercy? You were the only dream I´ve ever had, and now I feel that I am very sad, like the only man on the Earth… For a long time my feelings were blue, and now my heart can fix neither glue ´cause You told me Ur gonna leave me soon, and I´ve been hoping this will never happen, never to Me and You… Now I feel so badly, like never before, I wanted only You and nothing more, and God has shown his right face, and my heart is too much desperate, and there´s no way back … This truth is the chillest nightmare You can imagine, it´s much more colder than the most sinful dream, and I´m lonely only with my sorrowful fate which will follow me closely to the grave, I can´t no longer survive in this life full of pain… Irene, I know, You are the One, who has the power to heal but there´s no more time to speak with Death about a deal ´cause if You something love, it will go away too fast, and if You something hate, it will always seem to last, but why? Why is life so ruthless ?… text
Svetielko
04. 01. 2001
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nie je to nejaké naivné

Vio
04. 01. 2001
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Dtto Míwa...

Cavalera
04. 01. 2001
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Též bych řek, že ostatní jsou obsahově lepší, ačkoli téma stejné. Měl by jsi přitvrdit, ať je z toho ten správnej metálek:-))

Miroslawek
03. 01. 2001
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Kdybys to psal česky byla by to pouhá nenápaditá říkanka, takto mohu pouze velice kladně hodnotit Tvé cizojazyčné schopnosti, přestože anglický rodilý mluvčí by to zřejmě cítil také příliš prostě.

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