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SNAD

03. 05. 2008
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Snad

V životě připadám si jak v plotě kůl,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      mé hodiny tikají stále půl.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Snad najde se ten pravý,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                    který mi můj čas zpravý.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Snad příjde láska včas,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         než zešedne mi vlas.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          Snad neprotečemi život mezi prsty,                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      no to by bylo teda hustý!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Snad jednou příjde.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Možná?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Snad?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        Čekám!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Doufám!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              Achich ach!


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serp
03. 05. 2008
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mně to připadá trochu pubertální, rýmovačkové.. a hlavně se to špatně čte ze strany na stranu :( ale není to marné, myšlenku to má, rýmy taky.. ok, já taky nepíšu zrovna vysokou poezii ;) *

grafo
03. 05. 2008
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jak si napisala v poslednom riadku :)

To myslíš jak?

grafo
03. 05. 2008
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ach

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