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Sorry my Earth

14. 06. 2002
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Toto je sci- fi povídka pro ty, kdo umí anglicky. Ačkoli konec této povídky je mírně kostrbatý musí tam být...

SORRY MY EARTH

“Captain, I have a bad premontion.” “Really? Hmm. And what is it? “I think, that something terrible is coming to us.” “Very interesting. Yeh. But it´s quite impossible. We are in the space for 3 years and nothing bad happened.” ,,But …” ,,Well, we will be more careful today. Do you agree? ” ,,Yes I do. Thank you very much.” ,,It´s OK Jack.”

,,Captain, I worry about Jack.” ,,Why? ” ,,Because today he told me that the aliens are coming to us.” ,,It´s impossible. Hahaha. The other civilization doesn´t exist. It´s only us in the whole space. And don´t believe their crazy speeches. I hope that you are cleverer Mack.” ,,I am! ”

Few days later. “Captain, The monitor is broken up!” ,,How is it possible?” ,,And which monitor?” “The – navigation” said Mack sadly. “It´s not good.” Whispered the captain and was thinking about it for around 5 minutes. “Well, can you repair it?” “I´ll try it.” “And what about the other maschines?” shouted the captain. “I´m afraid that I have bad news. The transmitter is broken too.” “It doesn´t matter. We haven´t got a signal from the Earth for already one and a half years.” “OK.” “I said so that some terrible thing is going to happened.”cried Jack. “Don´t have so black ideas!”

So they flew without a transmitter and because Mack couldn´t repair the navigation, they were in the space like the bean in Mexico City.They flew maybe 5 days without the important maschines and every hour was broken some more. And these 5 days the captain, Jack and Mack thought mainly about their wives and families and other things, which they hadon the earth. And how they can go back to the Earth without the navigation.

When suddenly Mack screamed: “The driving doesn´t work!!! I can´t drive! What will we do?” “Jack was right. Something terrible came to us and no one has believed him…” whispered the captain. But their misgivangs were unnecessary, because something started shooting at them. They didn´t have time to do anything when the red shot bumpet on the ship. It started twisting.When it stopped, captain, Jack and Mack, saw the round, small ships everywhere around their spaceship.

They didn´t get over it yet, when they saw a white light. Suddenly they were somewhere like in a laboratory.They saw live aliens! From the little, round ship got out a huge, light blue alien with 2 heads and 4 hands. And one of the aliens was comming to them with a big knife.The captain was the first, who have felt the knife on his head. After Jack and last Mack. After this operation had these 3 good men new mission. And the aliens put them back on the Earth.

They were very, very famous, because they survived in the space for 3 years and no one was hopping that they are still alive..Everybody loved them, but people didn´t know, what will these 3 men do.

One day Jack and Mack made an advertisement on a foil, which they took from the planet of aliens.

Everywhere were these advertisements about the magic foil. For example in magazines: If you want to live healthy, if you want to have big and juici fruit and vegetable.If you want…You must buy our new magic foil! It cost only 10 dolars!!! When you have it you will have a better life!!!Buy it! Buy it! Buy it!

So people bought it and after a few days it was everywhere and nobody had an idea, that it´s stupid to have the foil in the sky and that Jack and Mack wanted to destroy their born planet. But when the foil was all around all Earth, the planet got warmer and warmer.The ice-bergs began to melt.So the continents were sinking and people could live only on the small pieces of the land. After some days the water began to boil and evaporate. When it started, the captain, Jack and Mack arrived back on the planet of aliens. And they did it at the right moment, because after few hours there was a huge explosion and the Earth wasn´t already a planet. There were only stones in a circle in the space. And the 3 men could only said: “Sorry my Earth.”


Škvarýš
15. 06. 2002
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nauč se pořádně English ("premontion", "maschines" .... ) blé

Quinn
15. 06. 2002
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Hmmm,tak dobrý,asi to dohromady nedam :o) ...málo snahy asi :o)

Lucy
15. 06. 2002
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Myslím, že tá poviedka pre tých, ktorí po anglicky vedia, rozhodne nie je... Zaujímalo by ma, prečo je to napísané po anglicky a vzhľadom na dosť chabé spracovanie nijak zvlášť originálneho nápadu aj, prečo je to napísané vôbec...

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