Americká párty, aneb paradoxy vnímání

poslední dvě věty...jsou...řekla bych...dokonalé...*

Bochužel já neznáju po anglicku :o(((

*

je to výborné! skláním se až k zemi... *****!

I stare, loving poems in english. Congratulation :-)

Good, I wonder if I am able to write such a piece in English. Rhyming, oh my gods, and in English... that's out my abilities. I must agree with Miracleion, that English is not, eh, common lang here. I have hed here also two pieces in English and one in German with a little or no success... Oppo to Miracleion, I like the "What 'thoughts' were they? A verb - without its noun…" verse. It makes sense to me... Thanks, nice reading.

davam tipa, skvele, skvele, skvele....dost vychytane

nesnáším párty, ale neumím angl. tak abych si to přeložil, takže mi to nevadí ;-))

Air filled with silence and candlelight nested in our eyes... it's my party... Lituju, ale ne všemu jsem rozumněla... příště si s sebou vezmu slovník :o)

Fine, but I think that there's not much people on this server to write and appreciate this kind of English. Still, you have my bow for such a piece of poetry. You surely deserve being tipped. I understand it fully and the feeling of a moment embraces me. You have a place in my Top list with this poem. Keep on writing for being able to create poetry in foreign language means mastery of that tongue. If you have any more English ones, please do not hesitate and post them. The only two things I would object to are: the title, which to me at least, seems a little bit inappropriate. I do not feel anything american from any part of the poem. I have even no clue where to look for paradoxes. The other is little bit forced rhyming in down-noun - as it seems to me, you had difficulties finding rhyme for down, so you made up this whole little bit senseles "verb without noun" thing... But anyway, the poem as a whole is good and impressive.

Mrzí mě, mrzí, že do nás komouši hustili jiný jazyk než ten anglický, a mrzí mě ještě víc, že jsme se proti tomu nevzbouřili dřív...

No tak jo!!! Jako zpraskana se stydim a jdu plakat do zdi...neumim anglicky..(((((

TAK TY SEŠ ATOMOVKA hned po Dědouchovi...T I P...