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06. 09. 2001
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.... it was a gloomy day
A little girl was sitting on the stairs
her eyes full of thousands pains.
It had started to rain
and I was passing her again.
Her eyes were so big and so sad
but she proudly held up her head
clinging firmly and much more
to her brown-haired little doll.
I passed her and wished to know
what makes people to fall so low
to run down their lives and the others too.
Oh - how much I wished I knew.
Dare say, the contents is not terribly good and some rhymes are very primitive: stairs/pains, more/doll???
Sorry.
All is allowed to be said, so no need for being sorry.
Nobody's perfect and I am no exception. Maybe next time ;-)